Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Really impressive preliminary exercise – going for the chorus was an excellent idea and the pace and number of shots is exactly what we want for a music video. Editing is the real strength here – superb pace, matches the beat and several really well constructed moments. Lip syncing is perfect in places but slightly off in others? Worth checking very carefully for full video. Do you need a separate studio performance element? Only comment on concept is to avoid it becoming too much like an advert for London tourism. Needed brand identity of your artist in there – that was part of the brief for the preliminary exercise. Really good pace of editing too many hair flips 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work WWW: variety