Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response


 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

  • Excellent clear introduction with added research ( views of original video) Timing a little out -a lot of text on the slides but not trying to read everything out which is good. 
  • Representation and stereotypes slide is good worth expanding for statement of intent. 
  • Narrative/ performance combination work but need to be a bit more specific in terms of narrative, camera shots and editing. 
  • Mise-en-scene is stronger with some specific ideas e.g. look + feel. 
  • Online element of magazine slide is good for digital convergence. social media too. 
  • Interesting ideas for representation theory but timing delivery little off. 
  • Industry interesting need to check Vevo element is it a record company shoe sponsorship and gender element worth exploring more.

Q+A 

  • Great Q on pop/ disco genre + how to create this 
  • Combination of performance and narrative discussed well. 
  • Perhaps a little lack of rehearsal / practise over theory question! 

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: good representation theory , well planned presentation and good detail. 

EBI: think maybe about sponsorship and less text on slides 

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

Everything may stay the same except the record company is probably going to change and maybe the  shoes sponsorship. I need to discuss and write more in my statement of intent and later on while filming I think it would be easier to discuss further details as well as more theories, and further explanations to my narrative , performance and locations. yes i can film with the things that I have available. 


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