Video rough cut learner response
Comments & feedback: There are some great elements here – the first minute is particularly strong. Excellent lip syncing, multiple locations, strong performance. It uses music video conventions and the pace, particularly in that opening section, feels just right. You’ve got a brand identity for the artist at the start but I wonder if that could be stronger and whether you can incorporate the shoe sponsorship too (I’m assuming the Nike section in the middle is for that but I don’t think I saw it anywhere else). I really like the effects in that final section but we can’t really give it credit if it’s after the three-minute mark. Is there a way you could use those elements elsewhere in the video? Overall, I think it’s worth reflecting on the complete three-minute structure when re-editing the final cut. The first minute is so strong but then later there are some shots that are on-screen for a long time which loses the excellent pace established early on. Improvements/chang...